I need your help!

hello friends! (:

I'm in need of somebody to edit a story for me. I try to proofread it but it always comes out grammatically f'ed up. haha.

So I'm looking for somebody who'd like to read over it for me, and let me know of any mistakes I'd need to fix.

Plus I'd also like somebody to give me suggestions! I take constructive criticism pretty well and am always open to new ideas. Cause other than my not so great grammar I'm not very good at details.

So if anyone is interested in being a proofreader for me, please message me!

And if you have some advice, feel free to comment.

(: thanks for you time

Oh, the story's called New Perspective if you wanna check it out.
(I still need to fix the errors, so bear with me. Haha)