Ok...

I need a little help guys (:
I'm kind of new to all this, and before I used to just write stories for myself. But I have this idea, and I really want to publish it here. Only problem is, I'm really selfconscious about my writting. I haven't written in years, and this isn't the best thing I have written. But, I was hoping there was someone I could befriend who will read through, and give me critism and pointers, or even add or take away things...

Even just some ideas, that would be awesome (:
So thanks to anyone who gives this the time of day, and thank you to anyone willing to help!
KimmyJade x