>.< IDEAS WANTED!!!

Yeah so I have a story
Obviously

Well it's been going pretty well but I'm starting to get writer's block and I don't want that to affect my writing and updating of the story. So please read my story and comment with ideas and helpful ways to improve my story. I know I have to work on my grammar and stuff but if there is anything else please tell me :)
Here's the link: http://stories.mibba.com/read/391183/She-Quenched-my-Thirst/
It's a twilight story so if you don't like twilight don't go to the story

Also I would like new friends so If your interested in befriending a 15 year old high school sophomore who can play the violin and her friends believe she is obsessed with Bruno Mars then comments below and send me a friend request. :D

Thanks for sitting here and reading this ?? yeah so
read
comment
request me as a friend
get use to my small amount of insanity ??