I drew my future characters! [+story help?]

I don't draw much, and I usually don't draw my characters when I do, but I did and decided to post them to promote a future story.

I'm not sure on the layout or title. Help?

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So here are my drawings (I took them with a webcam so the quality's not great.)



This is Marcel McCallum with the side profile of his superhero alter-ego Flyfoot.



This is Maisie McCallum; reluctantly Marcel's daughter.



This is Jesse; a close acquaintance of Maisie's.

I'm not really happy on Marcel's drawings, but I like the other ones.

Now to read My Immortal! I've read the first few chapters and I can see why it is ridiculed so often.