Song I wrote... tell me wut u think

Okay, I just wrote this song and I think its ok... but I wanna know what u think. It probably sucks so just tell me the truth.

On My Own Again

Sitting here alone,
I'm on my own.
Now I have to do things my way,
Cause I can't sit here waiting all day.
No matter how much I miss you,
I know we'll never do things we used to do.
It doesn't matter how hard I wanna turn back time,
It just aint gonna work.

I'm on my own,
Once again,
With no where to go,
Once again.
I guess its better this way,
Once again,
Just wait 'til you have to pay,
Once again.

I wonder why things ended up like this,
What did I do to deserve this.
I tried to make it work,
But you're just a jerk.
You didn't care for what was inside,
I should've known from when you lied.
That this was wrong,
That things were wrong.
We weren't meant to be.

I'm on my own,
Once again,
With nowhere to go,
Once again.
I guess it's better this way,
Once again,
Just wait 'til you have to pay,
Once again.

Just leave me alone,
Im better off on my own,
I'm on my own once again.
June 28th, 2007 at 03:56am