Comment Swap

writing a new story. I'm determined to finish this one since it'll only be a few chapters long, but I need some feedback, people. So how about a comment swap?

Here are the rules:
1. You comment first.
2. No fan fictions.
3. Give me more than a few words please!

Here's the URL:

http://stories.mibba.com/read/403471/The-Toy-Soldier-with-a-Lead-Heart/

please enjoy. It's short and I'm still working on the banner, but please just try it, you might like it.
If you spot any errors, let me know, I'll love you forever.

Stupid word limit. So blah blah blah blah blah, children, heartstrings, cannibals, mother nature. Is it enough yet? I hope so. so yeah. dah dah dah daaaahhhh