Comment swap?

I work really hard on my stories. I was wondering if someone would like to do a comment swap? I'll read and comment on whatever it is that they want me to read and comment on if they will read and comment on my story "The Truth". I have worked super hard on that story. Infact in my opinion it's the best one I ever writen. The chapters are really short but thats only because I don't want it to look like one big paragraph. I like splitting my stuff up into sections. I find that easier to keep up with when your reading something online.