Sorry, but a simple favor?

I just submitted a poem, and I'd like someone to see it. It's called Unidentified.
I'm proud of it, and I'm NEVER proud of any poetry I've written.
It would mean a lot to me if anyone reading this could read that poem, and possibly comment?
here's the link:
http://poem.mibba.com/259867/Unidentified
read and I'll give you a cookie :)

And I still have some words to kill, so, if there's anyone who reads this, thank you very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very very much.That would mean so much to me. I love you!