Looking for a comment swap?

I just updated my story Beautifully Dangerous. And I would really love some feedback on it... If you don't want to read the whole thing... at least the last four or three chapters would be nice. If you're like me and you like reading a story from the start so that you can understand than you can read whatever part from the story you want to. But I'd prefer it were the last few chapters.

So, I'll swap for that story...

RULES:

1. You get what you give!

2. YOU comment first

So swap away!