Harvey & taking story suggestions

Hey, all.

So, I wrote a short story for my fiction writing class a couple weeks ago, and since my teacher liked it, I decided to post it on here. Even though my class has already workshopped it, I would love to have extra feedback from you guys. The title of the story is Harvey (hence the title of this journal), and it's about an old man. Some people (such as a girl in my class named Brooke) may find parts of the writing jumpy and obnoxious, but I did it on purpose. My posting it on here is fueled completely off of my teacher's comments on it, and I want to know what others think.

So, if you're in the mood for a short story about an old man, featuring bits of his childhood, check it out. If you do, please comment, I'm open to any type of feedback (good, bad, etc.). I'd like to make the story as good as it can be.

Gracias.

Also, if you have any stories that you want to get read, I'm willing to check anything out that you suggest.