New Story...help?

Bonjour Mibbians!

New story! "It's You, I Suppose"

So I put up a new story today and it's just a one shot but I would like to make it more, but I'm really not too sure which direction I should take it or what kind of plot to give it. So it would be lovely if some of you would read (and let me know what I need to change and fix grammatically, I wrote it really fast in world history today so I'm not sure how grammatically sound it is...) but also, leave me a comment or inbox me and tell me where you think or would like the story to go...

Also, people have been commenting on how I use a pre made layout...I am un able to make layouts because I'm on an iPad. So sorry if it's not creative enough for you....read my writing and you'll soon see it's not about the layout, it's about the content.

I would heart you forever if you would read my story...:)

Alright, luvs...

--Addy

"I've got some friends some that I hardly know, but we've got some times I wouldn't trade for the world..."--Rise Against