NEW STORY idea. Should I go for it?

Recently I've been taken back to my love of Peter Pan (even planning a tattoo). So naturally I started a story. It's not about Peter Pan, but very loosely related to it, specifically a quote.

"If you wish it."

Which is actually the title (and the tattoo idea).

So here is an sneak peak.

“If you wish it,” he whispered.
I raised my eyebrows. “If you wish it?”
He nodded. “If you wish it.”
A silence fell upon us. It was just the two of us staring back at one another.
“Did you really just use a Peter Pan quote on her?” Owen’s friend ended the moment. “Really man?” he shook his head and walked away mumbling about how he ever became friends with such a cheese ball.

Should I go for it? I only have one chapter, so it won't go up for a while, but I think it'll be a good one!

Thanks,
Jenna