any one feeling generous

Ok Ok I know this might come off as desperate, and maybe I am, but I put a lot of work into this and I don't want it to go unnoticed.

So basically I wrote a poem and I really think its one of the best ones I've ever written and I really would like some feed back but it's only had one reader and I'm sad so say the one reader was me....

So I'm just asking if any one doesn't have anything to do could you please go check it out and tell me what you think? maybe?
I promise its not long at all

I really hate that I'm doing this I just really want to know what people think of it it its complete and utter shit or if its boring or anything you could hate it but at least I'd have something to go by.

I'm really sorry I'm such a dork I just haven't written in a while and I want to know what people think