I'd like to do a bit of comment swapping. Read this for details, please.

So, basically, I started a new story called Halcyon yesterday, and I'd really like some feedback on the two chapters I've posted so far.

It's a fanfiction, but to be honest you don't need to know who the characters are at all, and it stands alone fairly well as a story so do give it a chance. Personally, I'm enjoying writing this quite a lot, but I'd love to have some outside views.

What I'd like is for you to leave a decent length comment on the story comments, and I'll comment back on a story of your choice ASAP. I'm not going to be specific about how the comment should be, but you will get what you give.

Oh, and please comment on this journal telling me the story you'd like to swap for!

Click here to read Halcyon.

Thank you to everyone who does this!