Please read?

Ello people of the internet!

So I'm writing a story! It's about a couple who's been torn apart by war. The characters are based off of people I know and the main character I based off of myself. I've really put myself and feelings into it. I don't have any commenters and believe me, I know I sound desperate by asking, but can you read it? I really need to know if it"s worthy and if I should continue. It's my first story and I'm kind of nervous about it. Thanks!!
!http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/439045/Please-Stay/