[Could I?] Should I?

Sorry about the title... it was so tempting

Right, my [fanfic] story is here

http://www.mibba.com/story/chemical-reaction/She-doesnt-love-you-but-I-do/

I dunno weather I want to carry on or if it's okay how it is as the ending.

I know some people are sick of fanfics but pretend it isnt.

Someone tell me weather that sounds like a good ending...