Free Reads. | Pre-Reader Needed.

Give me something to read!

I prefer:

* Original horror.
* If it's fan fiction, only movie/tv show stories. (I mean stuff like Dean from Supernatural or Inception fics, no band stories).
* No slash or femmeslash.
* If it's an original romance story, I only like the quirky, fluffy stuff.
* This is free reads, so I might not comment unless I find it particularly interesting or unless you comment on the story linked below .

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I posted this in the forums as well...

I need a pre-reader for the third chapter - well, fourth if you include the prologue - of this story. I've already sent it to one person for them to check out, but I'd like to get a few additional opinions as well.

I'm just second-guessing what I have so far. I want honest opinions as to if I need to add something, take something out, or perhaps just start over.

Also, it's not complete yet, and it hasn't been sent to my beta, so there may be a few errors. Not that I'd mind those errors to be pointed out (on the contrary, I'd appreciate it) but my main need is for opinions on what has been written thus far.

Thanks in advance.