New Story?

Hey guysss!

I started a new story...
I know, I know. I kinda didn't even finish my other one, but I think this time is different.

I want to get your opinion if I should or not, I'll post a short paragraph from it. But please just inbox me if you think I should continue on writing it and put some chapters up as I go.

Here it is:

~I heard it, clear as day. A laugh that could be misheard as a melody to some, what followed it is what startled me, it left me breathless. Long blond hair flowed down her face and came to a stop in the middle of her back. But her eyes, the most calmest of blues, held a sparkle of mischief but also held a twinge of happiness. Happiness that flew around the whole room and changed even the grumpiest of people into a pool of deep bubbling laughter. I never got to know her name, but I decided to call her “the blue eyed beauty.”~

Any thoughts?

Cheers!
Tessa. (: