Avenged Sevenfold (Matt Shadows) fans please read!!

I'm totally new to all of this, well writing my own things, i've been on Mibba for a while just reading but I started writing my own fanfiction about M. Shadows, it's called This is the Story of Us!
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/497139/This-is-the-Story-of-Us/ Please check it out, I really want some feedback and wanna know if I should continue or not! Leave me some comments and let me know what you think, I reallly want to continue with it, but not if no one wants to read it! And if you do like it, then please recommend it!