Has anyone seen the movie "The Town"?

Okay, so after watching the movie and being very pleased with the action contect (Of course the two most attractive actors made it that bit more special)

I want to take the original story and add more twists, more of the character's background and really make it that bit more. I know it's dumb sort of basing a story around an already made film, but i think it would be a challange to me.

So, what i need some help with is feedback. How to make sure the scenes make sense.

I am also writing a Jeremy Renner fan-fic story that i would appreciate it someone could possibly take a look at it, chapter by chapter.

Please private mail me or message me on this if you would be willing to help or at least offer some advice. Especially writing action scenes.
November 27th, 2012 at 09:48pm