Wrong:
I loved that he was talking to me and I couldn't believe it. He was making me smile like no one else has and I couldn't help but speak about it. "I love you so much," I spoke to him. "I love you too."
I loved that he was talking to me and I couldn't believe it. He was making me smile like no one else has and I couldn't help but speak about it. "I love you so much," I spoke to him. "I love you too."
Right:
I loved that he was talking to me and I couldn't believe it. He was making me smile like no one else has and I couldn't help but speak about it.
"I love you so much," I spoke to him.
I love you too."
I loved that he was talking to me and I couldn't believe it. He was making me smile like no one else has and I couldn't help but speak about it.
"I love you so much," I spoke to him.
I love you too."
It makes it so much easier to read what you're trying to write and it wont give people headaches.
Also another is when you have a dark color, for the font, and a dark color for your background. Me, I have to squint and read it and it hurts my eyes after a while. You want a color that will offset the background and will be easy to see. I know you think it may look good, but you have to think about your readers too.