Editor/Proofreader needed.

I need someone to look over a paper I'm writing for my English class, and I figured what better place to ask than a writing website?

It's an evaluation essay. I had to pick something I own/use a lot and look at the effects it has on the environment. I chose cats - specifically cat litter and outdoor cats hunting (am I from the internet, or what?). It's about 1100 words.

I just need someone to see if I need to add anymore information/sources, and if I can "make you care" more (i.e. do I do a good job at relating this topic to you?).

If anyone is interested I can e-mail you the paper in Word form so you can just use track changes.