I need help. Severely.

So I'm Rachel. I've probably had this profile for over a year and I'm honestly a loner on here. I need friends and supporters. Especially supporters. Or just opinions in general of this story I'm about to post soon. It's not finished but...yeah. Please just help me or something? Or hook me up with idea sites or anything? I'm just hoping I can finish this book by Fall. Please please please,go to my profile, and become my friend, send me a message, comment, anything! Thank you all for your help..if you give it. My story is called Starry Skies at the moment, and I a about a gray haired fifteen year old girl, Ayla, and she is a fallen star. She fell when she was just 3 and an old woman took her in and hid her from public eyes. Now, as a teenager, a boy has seen her in the mountains and has found her and her "grandmother's" cottage. After being hidden for so many years, her grandmother decides its time for her to go to a real school and explore her surroundings. Will her new classmates discover what she is? Does Ayla even know what she is and her heritage? Her only clues are h gray hair and golden eyes. On a journey of friendship, Ayla and some unexpected followers, discover the mystery behind the starry skies.