Ok, I'm going to try this again. Last time I tried a comment swap, I read and commented but no one else bothered to help me back. Maybe two people but that was it. I have a story I would like read, two actually but it's an either or at this point. I would use regular comment swap but mine's broken and has been for months. Ok here's the plots:
One is a new one I am writing called 'Song Of The Dead - it IS based off of the crow movies but with a completely different twist. It's about one brother getting kidnapped instead of the other brother (whom owes a debt) so they tak the older brother and make an example out of him (shoot him then bury him alive) before he dies he makes a promise not to let anything happen to his youngest brother, even though it was his fault. So he comes back from the land of the dead and starts seeking his revenge. It will be a lot more graphic then the normal Crow stories. So if you're into that please feel free.
The 2nd one is called 'The Perfect Victim' not too much a fan in how it's going right now but I'm working out the kinks to it. A deaf girl and her employer are taken hostage and forced to rob a bank. The bank robbers consist of 2 brothers who have no choice but to follow orders and 2 others who are the masterminds behind the whole thing. One of the brothers takes a liking to her for personal reasons and now it's a will they or won't they survive. here's the links for both stories:
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/520869/Song-Of-The-Dead/
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/514718/The-Perfect-Victim/
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