"Constructive Criticism Available Here [Unable to Progress with my Stories]"

If you have stories you want me to read and review I will be more than happy to check them out and give my thoughts on them. You can give me originals, fan fiction and even true stories. I've been getting into the spirit of commenting now that I have more time since giving birth to my son, so I'll be a very happy camper if you give me something to read. I'm not too keen on reading full stories but if you have one or two you want me to read I will consider it.

Meantime, if you don't don't want to take you can give, if you're into that sort of thing. Here is some of mine that I would not mind a comment or two on:

~ Vision of Clouds
This is a One Direction fan fiction featuring Zayn Malik. It does feature mentioning of him smoking so if you're one of those people who are not a fan of smokers, do not read. It's rating (will be changed to) NC-17 as well. [Not Completed]

Summary:
Zayn starts to feel his world of music is collapsing around him, his motivation to sing is lacking poorly and he begins to seek more help from his pack of cigarettes and alcohol. Until he meets a mysterious woman that helps guide him back to reality in the strangest most uncommon way.

~ The Doctor Meets a New Nightmare
This is entered into a contest hosted by silk tea., I mentioned it in my last blog if you're interested. As you can probably guess, it is Doctor Who and Disney in one story - Matt Smith as the Eleventh Doctor and Nightmare Before Christmas. [Completed]

Summary:
The Doctor jumps through a crack in his TARDIS, only to end up in a world that seems impossible. He has no idea where he is and that excites him. Oh, does it excite him? Can you feel his grin?

~ Fragile Hearts
This is another contest entry, the delightful Katie Mosing hosts the contest, and you can also find it mentioned it in my last blog entry. The prompt was to write about a handsome man and I have chosen the very lovely David Tennant. I have been in love with him since I watched L.A. Without a Map, since discovering my love for him in Harry Potter and Doctor Who. Unf. [Not Completed]

Summary:


She's the girl with a lot of insecurities but I love her regardless, she makes me crazy in love. I'll tell her no matter how long it takes for her to become accustomed to hearing it, no matter how sick she gets of hearing it. I'll whisper it in her ear, against her skin. I'll tell her in the morning sunrise, I'll tell her in the shower. I'll be there for her now to make up for all the lost times.

I'll lay her to sleep at night with her watching romantic movies and watch it until the end. She will have fallen asleep halfway through the movie and, in that quiet lull during the night, I'll slip under the covers and cuddle her into my arms. I'll fall asleep to the sounds of our fragile hearts.

There you go, I hope you find something you want to read and I look forward to reading your submission.