Blog Request, Story Review♥

This is a blog request, I read stories and blog about them so they are more recognized and get more feedback.

The author of this one shot is, Lestat de Lioncourt.

> Like the Ticking of the Clock <

This was very entertaining!

Your writing is great. You give the right amount of detail, but you don't smother me with it.

I love the story line, it is like this guy's feeling of guilt is just shadowing him. Or at least that's how I feel. I mean the whole hallucinating Finny in the bar is what brought that idea. And the fact that he is still thinking about that specific memory.

This is great, could definitely be turned into something more than a one shot.

I don't really see any problems with your grammar either, which is always refreshing.

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To anyone who would be interested in reading this. I 100% recommend for you. It's truly entertaining and a treat to read.

Here is the link:

Like the Ticking of the Clock .

Also, anyone who would like for me to review their story, send me a message with the link to that story.