Resurrecting a Dead Piece

Nobody is likely going to read this. If by chance, you are, maybe you are one of the (I think it's going to be about) 2-3 people who saw this and read it out of curiosity. I wrote a piece a while back called Re-Soul. That was my second revision of it. I stopped caring and never finished it. HOWEVER! I have a new and refreshing look at it, and will rewrite it for (yes) a third time. It will be different in many ways, but the basis will be heavily grounded in everything I've written so far. If you so kindly read this short little story, I thank you a bunch, and all I ask for some feedback. Anyone who could read the long dead piece and give some feedback would be lovely. Keep in mind however, it is very unfinished and highly imperfect. It is really a bare-bones look at the basis of my story. The revision project will be called
ANIMA INTRAPPOLATA.

For reference, it means "trapped soul."

Side note, I will try to fill this piece with al kinds of feels. So if that's your thing, you found your place.