Who's up for a comment-y swap thing?

Now, I've seen quite a few people doing comment swaps, and I'd love to get some feedback, I mean, who doesn't want feedback?

My first priority for feedback would be my poem, Magic Act.

If you're not a poem enthusiast, here are some stories to choose from (I've also been really nice and added word count so you know what you're getting yourself into):
Paintball - 363 words.
Stealing Diamonds From Eyes - 452 words.
Dear Emma - 1 056 words.
Himmel - 346 words.The Locket - 1 148 words.

I'll leave at least a fifty word comment on a story / poem of your choice in return. (It will also be constructive criticism.)
I'm not picky about which one you read, as long as you leave a good comment on mine that I can work with.

So, comment with the story that you're commenting on, and what you'd like me to comment on, and we've got ourselves a deal.