Heyy.
So I'm back again hoping for some legit feedback on my story.
It's not so much grammar and punctuation I'm worried about it's the story itself.
It's called Bruised and Scarred (taking after the song by Mayday Parade)
and I really want to know about the story itself.
What do you think the lesson is?
Is the plot any good?
Is it something you'd want a sequel to? (It is finished as of right now)
Do I portray the characters in an evenly manner?
Do I add something but then never mention it again in the rest of the story?
Chapter titles?
Do the chapter titles make sense?
Do you like when authors name chapters or just number them?
Does it seem realistic if it were to happen in real life?(not all of it cause I know not all of it is entirely possible?)
These are just some of the questions that I'd LOVE to have answered.
And if you comment on my story tell me weather you've read till the end and what you liked and didn't like.
When you do comment on my story leave me a link to your story so that I can read and comment on it.
"Oh my god its amazing"
does not count as a comment.
So please if you will comment and let me know if I should write a sequel!
Thank You!
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