Would you Like to Swap Comments?

Hi everyone. I've been writing a story called Art Schooler's that I want some comments on. I need some advice on what I can change or what you like. I'm willing to comment on anyone else's story. My story is 4 chapters long right now, about 3,000 words long, I can read anything though. It might take a little bit of time for me to finish reading it, as I've been rather busy lately, but I will provide a detailed comment expressing anything I think might help the story or what may be hindering it. Let me know what story it is that you'd like for me to read and we get started! I'll do as many as I get.
about 14 hours ago
December 18th, 2013 at 07:09pm