Help!

Hey guys! I have a quick favor to ask of you, so if you could help me out, I would really appreciate it. Okay, I've just posted a new short story called Gnomely Days and I was curious on if I should publish it. I really want to, but I need to know if it's good enough to publish. So, in other words, if you could read it and then let me know, that would be awesome!

If there are any mistakes, anything I should fix, etc., let me know since I really, really want to get this out to the world. So please, comment! Thanks!

Here's the link: http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/549649/Gnomely-Days/1/
February 19th, 2014 at 08:05pm