New Writing Style?

I'm trying to finish one story at a time, and I'm trying to use a different writing style with each. Well, anyway, I think I've found the writing style I like best. It's like the thoughts of a person? I've got two ways of writing in that style. Full, proper sentences told from a PoV but are abruptly changed. So like, one minute they'd be talking about flowers and then they'd be like I'm hungry.

The other way is short, broken sentences. I like this way a lot more because it looks more interesting, but believe it or not, it's harder to write. I try to continue the pattern in each chapter but it's actually really hard for me to keep up a person's thought stream.

What's your writing style?

Also, I started a new story called Short-Haired Juno. The chapters are seriously short. Like, I have three chapters up and the word count is 146 words. So, if anyone wants a short story to read, there ya go :- )
April 28th, 2014 at 10:36am