Chapter Edit: Baby Blues

So I just update the Baby Blues chapter of Trade Baby Blues. It was niggling at me--I felt like there should be more of Patrick and Anna, after what happened. I want to develop Patrick's character more, but it's difficult, what with him being so shy and all. We're talking pre-Solo Punk Patrick, here.

I know I'm going to end up mixing timelines, too, so I want to apologise in advance--I'll be including events that are true to real life, but they may not be in the right order. It'll all depend on how the story unfolds. All in the name of art, so don't hate me too much. :p

I just hope I've stayed true to Patrick's character...it's so hard to get them just right. Pete may be the main LI, but Patrick has a huge role to play. Any comments on the change would be much appreciated. :)

Ciao,

Blue.
May 13th, 2014 at 11:35am