I have gone through and edited this story a bit. Some new sentences here and there. Others are just picking up on issues with tense and point of view. I was a bit too eager to get this out and obviously didn't edit enough.
If you wish to read the story over and see how you feel about the edits, I would love some feedback. Otherwise, that's fine if you don't haha.
I have started taking a new writing class, and hopefully as I take the class my writing will mature.
Bare with me, please. But I really appreciate all the support. Thank you.