Comment Swap?

So I wrote a new story, and I would like to have some feedback on it. I know right off the bat it's not the best writing of my life, but I tried to get this idea out. As I progress into it I'm sure it will get better. I also want to complete a full story chaptered story idea for once in my life.

The Somethin's Souls is the title of my story. It's a horror/thriller story. I hope someone will like it.

I also know at least ten people will comment on this at once, and I only wanted a few opinions to get me started. so I will take the maximum of three comment swaps. FIRST COME FIRST SERVE! Please leave the link to your stories in the comment section first three, thank you.

Here I am again...not 100 words. I really need to start becoming chatty on here.
How is everyone? Is your writing coming along better then mine?

That should do it!
Have a great night guys!
August 20th, 2014 at 02:54am