BDSM Slash Writers: Help, Please?

I've been working on this 100 Prompt Challenge thing for... far too long now, really, and I've finally come to one that's had me stuck for quite a while. Like, I've been working on it for months before I even got to this prompt. I remember messaging someone for advice on whether or not I was going in the right direction, and that was a little over a year ago.

Needless to say, at this point I need different advice from someone (or a few people) who could give me a little more insight. I've done research on the different topics and everything, but I still feel like I won't be able to portray everything correctly. I haven't even gotten into the actual act happening yet, and I'm still worried about it.

Really, what I need is for someone to read over each little piece as it's written to let me know if it sounds stupid or rushed or anything like that. A quick complete read-through before the entire thing gets posted would be helpful, too, but it's not required.

If you're interested in helping out (and have sufficient knowledge/experience), leave a comment or drop me a message so that we can get started!

Thanks!
December 24th, 2014 at 08:03am