Hey guys, i just joined this site so im still getting the feel for it. I was just making this post to get some feedback on a story i have been working on called Fallen. Its only one chapter right now but i will continue to add to it if people enjoy it and want me to. Any feedback though will be much appreciated even criticism, im looking to grow as a writer so i would like to here flaws and strengths. I will also be willing to give feedback on anyone elses stories as well. Just send me a message or comment so i know.
The link for the story is here.
http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/593639/Fallen/
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