New Stories

I have some ideas for stories to put on here but I could really use some feedback.

idea1:
A couple, dating for a few years, discover that his dad and her mom have been dating for some time and plan on getting married. So, they decide to get married too so they don't technically become step siblings.

idea2:
She is new to town, an orphan, and on her own. Being out of school she doesn't have to worry about not getting an education. There's something different about her. He's drawn to her dark brown eyes and deep brown hair and how in the moonlight she is still glowing. Secrets, she is a witch and he is something dark and sinister.

Please give feedback. Any and all commentary is welcome. Also any more ideas are welcome. I'm into writing fiction /supernatural.