First Story Layout. Yay or Nay?

Uh, erm, hi. I’m not sure if I shold be making another blog so soon but I was wondering if someone could tell me whether this story layout looks fine. I’ve never messed w/ the stay layout maker til now. I’m actually quite happy w/ how it turned out but I feel I could use some opinions. So help? Is it a yay or a nay?

Anyways, adding onto what I stated in my last blog… about writing stories. Im thinking maybe I shouldn’t start off w/ a slash just yet. Maybe a story about a girl who was or is sort of a bird/dragon/human hybrid & like she’s the only 1 of her species & she kinda gets caught or taken in by this circus troupe (I think it could be one of those freak show things, too, idk yet). Idk what the full idea is yet. I do know tat I’m making a second main character that’s a mermaid. This story is loosely inspired by the anime/manga +Anima cause the mcs are a bird boy and a fish boy respectively. But it’s not a +Anime fanfic. ^^

Bye.