Alphabet/ABC Prompts, Rule Breaking and Comment Swap

I'm not calling it the challenge because I'm not really following the rules.

In my typical fashion, I'm changing it to fit to a single story I want to write, every chapter is based off of letters and may have a single word or multiple words.

Okay so this is based off of one my original works.

Technically a fan fiction of my own work but instead written as a disjointed narrative that hops around. To guide how I write the chapters, each chapter has a dominant letter.

It's kind of a writing experiment to write in the writing style of one of my favorite books Slaughterhouse Five by Kurt Vonnegut that I read in high school.

Nowadays I bide my time reading manga, fantasy series, fan fiction and romance novels. I thought it would be fun to try and throwback my writing to when I only read " literature "

I was also trying to make it stream of conscious like James Joyce does in Ulysses but I'm not sure how successful it is.

The genres include romance/fantasy/horror/drama/tragedy

It's also NC-17 haha

Here's the link --> READ ME

I would really like feedback on it so I will do a COMMENT SWAP ;] would prefer original fiction or fan fiction in the genres I write in. Please no band fan fiction (no trying to offend anyone, just not my cup of tea)

Here's the letter words, I tried to pick as pretty words as possible :D These are subject to change but I doubt they will:
A- Abandon, Arcanum, Ataraxy
B- Belphegor, Belliferous
C - Cicatrize, Clandestine, Catharsis, Castle
D - Demon, Divination, Darkness, Daedalus, Dactyliomancy
E -Effleurage, Entropy, Ebb, Evil, Equilibrium, Empyrean, Elysium
F-Fallen, Fecundity, Found, Feathers
G- God
H - Halycon, Hiraeth
I -Ice, Ichor
J - Judgement, Juxtaposition
K - Kill, Kairos
L -Lacuna, Lace, Lost
M - Mirror, Monster, Maelstrom
N - Nemesis, Nexus, Near
O - Oculus, Omnipotent, Obstreperous, Obverse
P -Phobia, Pulchritudinous, Prolix
Q - Quixotic
R - Recidivism, Recoil, Redemption, Rhetorical
S - Shadow, Scapegoat, Scintillating, Schadenfreude, Shattered
T - Tacenda, Taste, Thought
U - Under, Ugly, Ulysses, Uprise
V - Void, Vendetta, Vagabound
W - Wings, Wood, Wrong, Warlord
X - Xenophobic,
Y - Yearning, Yin, Yang
Z - Zendik, zwischenzug