Creative Criticisms!

My mother is writing a story, and she really wants an outside opinion on if the story seems interesting or like something anyone would be willing to read, So i told her to post it here! yay!

So please, mass share her story please! All criticisms would be enjoyed.

Its currently Untitled.

Please and Thank you!

Ps. Blog was too short. SO uh, how about that weather.

Is it long enough yet?

No. Okay...... Well... I HAVE EXCITING NEWS!

But that's for another blog.....

Uh, Lets welcome my mom to mibba the write way!
April 20th, 2016 at 01:02am