Comment Swap & Life Update

Hello again, Mibba!

So today I completed a competition entry - it's called Dreamscape and it's a little experimental. I've noticed that the feedback I get most often is that my stories are not particularly clear, that they're a little too wispy and fluffy and aren't structured enough.

I've tried hard with this story, although part of the purpose of this one is that you don't actually fully work out what's happening straight away and you reach a gradual understanding. I'm anxious to see if it's worked at all, so if you have a story that needs some love, leave a link in the comments and leave me some feedback on Dreamscape here. I'll be sure to return the favour :)

In other news, I had two friends visiting me from the UK for the last 3 weeks and they went home today - super super sad. It's been really nice having other voices around the house. I've had to leave the TV on tonight so that it doesn't feel so quiet, which has been weird to say the least.

Hope you're all well - anything exciting happened recently/soon?

-B

June 27th, 2016 at 12:09pm