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- Spelling errors
- Punctuation errors
- Dialogue tag errors
- Plot Holes
- Slow Pacing
- **Anything else that might be wrong
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We just need someone to be honest with us and tell us their opinions and suggestions. We don't want to hear, "Oh I love this it's great!" We do want to hear, "This part might be a little slow, I would change this line to make it better." or "I recommend deleting/merge these chapters to make the story flow better.."
Leanne has talked to a few people about this, and we have had editors in the past, but Underestimate Me is a very hard story to take in. You have to like this style of writing in order to successfully do it. It is a formal style like Austen or Martin.
This story involves the following triggers:
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- War
- Rape
- Cutting
- Murder
- Emotional Abuse
- Child Abuse
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It is strongly steeped in feminism.
Joss and Rowen deserve the absolute best, so we want to make this story as perfect as possibly can. Someone please help us do that. We would like more than one editor due to the size of this trilogy. Any and all help will be much appreciated.
Message either Leanne or Myself for more info.