Beginning of a story idea....

I've been trying to think of a story idea so this is a begining that popped into my head so i just want to see what people thought.

Ivan woke up on a cold november morning, it was still early it was about 4 in the morning. He could no longer sleep, no longer dream. As he got up to close the window he started to look at the sky and think, think of all that had happened in the year, all the ridicule. But as he looked at the stars he thought of one thing and only one thing........... Her......
October 20th, 2007 at 09:46pm