My Stories.

Okay, I posted my story. I had yet to get any comments. :(...
I think people don't comment because I want to take it slow unlike my other stories...
Is that it?
Is it because it's named after an r&b song and not some MCR song or lyric?
Well, then you have problems.
Read my story because I want to actually continue this story and get somewhere with it. I can't do that if no one comments or at least checks it out.
And if I get banned for this I could care less because I want to get my point out.
I'm really sad because of that and I can't go to Vanessa's party today...
And I'm feeling sick. I had hit my arm several times today in the same spot and I have a bruise. Ew..
So please at least read and tell me whats wrong or right with my story and if I should continue or not to make me feel better...
(I sound like I'm begging. Ew. I don't beg. )
Danii
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