[My Fic] Liberation Transmission

Ages ago I posted a journal asking people what album I should write a fic based of, whether the band should be in it and whether or not the story should be a collection of one shots or not. I ended up writing Liberation Transmission, and I have to say it worked pretty well. I've finished it! First thing I've actually finished in ages, and I'm not in the process of uploading all the chapters.
Going to post another "what shall I write next" journal soon, but in the mean time if anyone wants to check out Liberation Transmission (which I am very proud of and personally think it's the best thing I've written) it can be found here:

Liberation Transmission

Be great to get some feed back on it. Comment me here, comment the story, message me...just let me know what I can improve, what's wrong with it etc for me to keep in mind for next time.

Elle x