Our Band

Hey guys, I'm new at making journals so just go along with me. Well, I made a discovery today.

Pencils don't taste good.

I've been trying to write a song and haven't got much. -continues writing- I have some rhythm but mostly words. I'll show you the words soon, just keep reading. You see me and my friends are starting/are in a band. I only need 100 dollars ((38 more)) until I get a bass and lessons. Then we are set to go. We have our guitarist, behind.the.gossip. ((name constantly changes)). Our piano player is Elly, she isn't on here ((not yet at least)). Finally our drummer is Ashie, also isn't on here ((YET)). xD

New discovery! Paint tastes just as bad as pencil.

All right, we have some band names and need help. Pick the on you like best and either put the name or the number next to it ((preferred the number)).

1) Battlefield Gunfire
2) Underground Goals
3) The Bruised Hearts
4) Cyanide Hearts

Okay, for the moment you have all been waiting for! The song had some tweaks and polishing but this is what we, -ahem- I, have so far::

Song tittle :: Just How The Story Ends

She pulled up that hood faster than you thought
She shunned you more than ever caught
You could never catch up with the lot
You had seemed so overwrought
Just how we had never thought

How do you rip a heart in half just like a daisy?
How can you say such things with just a straight face?
Disdain, disgust, dislike, distaste
As simple as the phrase “I hate you”
As similar as the saying “I don’t love you”

You tore my heart in two
It used to be me and you
I loved you for infinity times two
But now minus you
It’s just never plus two

How do you rip a heart in half just like a daisy?
How can you say such things with just a straight face?
Disdain, disgust, dislike, distaste
As simple as the phrase “I hate you”
As similar as the saying “I don’t love you”

I like the third verse. =D Tell me your thoughts.