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Hello! I know I havn't updated my first story and that there's only ONE chapter and I'm really sorry, but my classes are being super evil and giving me sooooooo much homework. I'd like some comments plz, cuz I feel like such a loser with no one commenting me and shtuff.(even if i AM a loser...) so...oh, i'd also like some feedback if you want me to continue this story or not, I promise it gets better but for now it's introducing characters and the plot. If you don't want me to continue just tell me so I won't waste my time continuing it. And if you have ANY suggestions on how I can improve that would also be greatly appreciated! I havn't written a story in a long time so I'm a little rusty...and sometimes people just downright DON'T like my stories...

Plz and Thank You!
Tobi