Kiss Me

I'm writing a new story, a song fic, based on the song "Kiss Me" by New Found Glory, yes by New Found Glory.

Here's a teaser:

Kiss me, beneath the milky twilight, lead me out on the moonlit floor

(memories)
Moonbeams fall down creating stepping stones on the wood floor. Shafts of white light sunshine bright and his hand is outstretched toward her. All around is twinkling stars and wide spaces and the wood is rotting beneath her feet.

This is a memorable scene (firstkisscuddlingwillyoumarryme?) and now she's back for the last time, the first time since Josh's death

End of teaser.

So what do you think?