Stories - Help please?

Hey all.

I read all the one-shot story rules, and the rules on normal stories. I have to fix up my grammer and some other things. While I am getting through my stories, slowly. I am fixing up the things I see.

Some spelling, speech marks, random capitals and paragraph spacing. I have two more of my stories to fix up. I will try get it done this week.

I would love someone to read my stories and tell me what else is wrong with them, because it tells me "one or more of your stories has something wrong with it." I don't know exactly which ones, so I'm going through them all, but after I go through them, I don't know how to get rid of that. Can some one help me figure out what is wrong?

So, yeah that about it, I will fix the stories A.S.A.P. Oh and also, I might be posting a new story soon. Maybe two. If I can, I will update one of my other stories.

If you guys can help me, please message me,
Thanks,
Iliveontightwadhill